Increased resolution from 96 dpi to 300 dpi.
Here is a re-edit of the above to fit an 8×10 (vertical) format. I think it is worth considering.
Here is the new image, lightened up, and formatted to 8×10 (horizontal):
The images below will be sized to 5×7.
Increased resolution from 96 dpi to 300 dpi; lightened dark areas.
Increased resolution from 96 dpi to 300 dpi; balanced the skin tones.